Sunday, December 17, 2006

For Brittany

Victory inhibit
Let go of my hand
If you can't learn to fly
You can't learn to stand

If I am your hero
Dark angels are we
Listening to voices
Living through dreams

With sadness and mercy
The day must dawn
Creating a world
Where children aren't young

An echo, a shade
Glimmer from the past
This knowledge that comes
What we learn last

Though creatures all
We are a different strain
Similar and yet
Not quite the same

Something forbidden
In shades of grey
A mixture, a blend
Leading this way:

Step into the sun
Step into the night
Creature of darkness
Creature of light

4 comments:

Shadow Lor said...

Thoughts to Tears of the Future and Error404

Anonymous said...

That was awesome. Especially the last stanza. Very nicely done, love.

Anonymous said...

RYN: I once cleaned my room and found Sunday comics from a year and a half prior. I filled up over two trash bags that day. That was just before we moved here. Once we moved into this house, I didn't really dirty my room with anything, so it's stayed fairly clean. I haven't cleaned it in the more than two years we've lived here... though Jeremy and Dad have vacuumed it a couple times when they vacuum the other rooms...

Anonymous said...

Wow. That's absolutely awesome. Has to be one of the best ones you've ever written. Has such an amazing flow to it... Wonderful message in it as well. Excellent, excellent work.


All my love,
Aodhan

 
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