Thursday, March 01, 2007

Would That the Trees Break

Would voice the way it falls
Broken wings and hollow eyes
Would tell the story
Would sing the song
But find it's been voiced all along
In four parts
A harmonious discord of damnation
Would present the lights
Would light the dawn
And draw the feathers from the ground
Glory-
Glory to the dead of sound-
And when-
And when we cry we scorch the ground-
Would repeat the rhymes
And hold the own
Would change the way it falls
But blood is rain
And rain is pure
Would light the darkend halls
Softly agonized and with great rebellion
Here is she...your last hellion
She'll be the one
She'll taste the blood
She'll lead the damned
She'll kill the dead
And bring the voices in your head
Would we were the dead of fire
And quest-
And quest for power-
Here is she, your own design
A bright red mark
Across a black line

4 comments:

Russell CJ Duffy said...

this the best.
this special.
very special indeed.
you have steped out of your self AND the box and have given us something extra.
you MUST be very pleased with this on?

spiderball98 said...

i like it! probably one of the best ones ive read!

Anonymous said...

Ditto to what CJ said (fixed the spelling, though lol).

Very good, baby. Your writing started out great, and you get even better each and every time you write something new. You're a natural. You're gifted. Truly gifted.

I love you, so very much. Always and forever and all eternity.

Even unto the ending of the world...
After the world ends...
Aodhan

Anonymous said...

I like what CJ said about you "stepping outside the box"!

 
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