Against my better judgement
I find my thoughts on you
And when I guide them back to the present
My heart aches
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Owwwww ...
u bear the cross-of-changes :) the previous scribble has melted away to lead the reader into a wishful human/person in this verse...
who is the real you? maybe both.. maybe like the lunar pulls on the waves of teh open seas... the highs n lows create the trance of life in u!! whatever... loved the way u articulate man!! n if u choose to read mi posts n comment... don worry abt rambling on.. coz i ramble n ramble quite shamelessly!
ps: ur comment has given me a tickle... guess a post is germinating inside
Yeah, mine too.... such a timely poem!
I Hope your tomorrow is full of light and promise.
I am with anon.....
*Katie- much thanks. And may your tomorrow hold the same.
yes oh yes. image and words (kind of haiku) really work. excellent.
That's called 'haiga'! If the two are combined ... :)
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