Thursday, September 14, 2006

Recorded

-a taste in my mouth-
Rewind
-a taste-
Rewind
-who smiles on-
Rewind
-in the darkness-
Rewind
-last chance-
Rewind
Here we stand:
Hold on
To the moon when it's gone
In silent victory we shake
Tumble down
Little hills and valleys
Worthy words and voices
Service
Take this last chance
Hold on
When in the darkness we fall
Opression
One who smiles on us all
Leaves a taste in my mouth
Leaves a taste in my mouth
Hold on
The last line is yet to be written-

2 comments:

Russell CJ Duffy said...

hey, look at you, experimenting with a new style. and you know what?
it works too. great.

Shadow Lor said...

*CJ

actually, i'm pretty certain it sucks, but thanks anyways. :-)

 
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