Once upon a time
Once upon a marvelous time
When the sky was blue
And the sun was golden
And the birds were making a-
(terrible buzzing)
-In the trees,
There lived a princess
The most beautiful, completely-
(crazy, just bloody crazy)
-Maiden the kingdom had ever seen
She lived in a beautiful castle on the top of a hill
And she spent all day-
(in shock therapy, currently)
-Just waiting for her prince to arrive with-
(another shot! Hurry it up!)
-So that she would be-
(drugged for a fucking long time)
-Her prince leaned over and said-
(She's waking up!
Keep her still, here's the shot
Watch out for her feet!
There we go
Back to sleep now, princess)
But the princess was discontent with her prince
And planned to wake
Wednesday, April 08, 2009
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3 comments:
interesting narrative... short, terse lines...
like how you've accentuated two voices with the parenthesis...
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:o)
will she have a carving knife?
sometimes it aint anyonez business, or might then any question be answered?
a knife used to hunt pieces of urself from the pieces of glass.. i have read tat comment left.. read tat many a time... and din know if there are words enough to even try a comment back; we are all used to the patterns of life... two hands for a clap, two eyes for a nap... (just for the sake of stupid rhyme!) 'n one heart (mindless!!) to poetic suffrage???
holier than thou again! but who is to ask... in this free world, to a global citizen, who has the right to question? we all are without a purpose on a trip alone :) if u were in india wud have requested for a meeting (aint quite improper i guess!!) but then earth is really the thitd largest planet 'n aint have any fly-by power... but really have a lot of questions.
(am sorry for this comment... but just is honest)
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